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Lovers – Love of My Life 3

December 11, 2021

Painting, by Carmen Tyrell, United Kingdom

Acrylic on Canvass

She was feeling, thinking,
trembling about everything;
agitated, happy, miserable,
infinitely obliged, absolutely angry. –Jane Austen, Mansfield Park

Full of hope and perseverance,
mastery and grace –
at the heart of her story 
she’s come, undone
.

16 Comments
  1. That comma is just ingenious, Abi.


    David

  2. Brilliant, Abi. Agree with David too. Undone is where the heart shines. Magnificent poem, my dear friend. ❤️❤️

    • Thank you Jeff❤❤. Thank you so much, your thoughts are kind and warms the heart. So it is, undone. Brilliant erotic writing from Ms. Austen too.

      • Most welcome, Abi. Always. Mmm, yes, mine too. ❤️

        Indeed, Ms. Austin, amazing. ❤️❤️

  3. 🙂❤❤

  4. Very beautiful!

  5. Very beautiful
    Beautiful poem. Life is unpredictable anyways…why spend it hopeless and purposeless?…i enjoyed reading

    • Hello Lebo, good to see you and pray you are doing very well.
      How wonderful it is to be infused, I’m so happy you feel the beautiful.

      I am in awe of poets and authors like Austen, I am in awe of someone like you.

      Boundless energy for the craft
      And even in fractured times,
      Genius show up.

      Thank you so much for reading

  6. Beautifully written Abi!

    • Good morning my dear. It’s been quite a while since we last spoke.
      Good to see you babes, and I’m always endeared by your appreciation. Thank you so much.
      How are you keeping?

      • Hey!!!! I’m doing good. Enjoying life and keeping busy with work and my kiddos. How about you girlie?

      • Oh lovely….🙂
        Hahaha, this old girlie is a bit under the weather this morning but she will be ok….

      • Good!! Have a great Monday!

      • It’s been a threadbare Monday. Thank you….wishing a great Monday.

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