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Lovers – Love of My Life 3

December 11, 2021

Painting, by Carmen Tyrell, United Kingdom

Acrylic on Canvass

She was feeling, thinking,
trembling about everything;
agitated, happy, miserable,
infinitely obliged, absolutely angry. –Jane Austen, Mansfield Park

Full of hope and perseverance,
mastery and grace –
at the heart of her story 
she’s come, undone

  1. That comma is just ingenious, Abi.


  2. Brilliant, Abi. Agree with David too. Undone is where the heart shines. Magnificent poem, my dear friend. ❤️❤️

    • Thank you Jeff❤❤. Thank you so much, your thoughts are kind and warms the heart. So it is, undone. Brilliant erotic writing from Ms. Austen too.

      • Most welcome, Abi. Always. Mmm, yes, mine too. ❤️

        Indeed, Ms. Austin, amazing. ❤️❤️

  3. 🙂❤❤

  4. Very beautiful!

  5. Very beautiful
    Beautiful poem. Life is unpredictable anyways…why spend it hopeless and purposeless?…i enjoyed reading

    • Hello Lebo, good to see you and pray you are doing very well.
      How wonderful it is to be infused, I’m so happy you feel the beautiful.

      I am in awe of poets and authors like Austen, I am in awe of someone like you.

      Boundless energy for the craft
      And even in fractured times,
      Genius show up.

      Thank you so much for reading

  6. Beautifully written Abi!

    • Good morning my dear. It’s been quite a while since we last spoke.
      Good to see you babes, and I’m always endeared by your appreciation. Thank you so much.
      How are you keeping?

      • Hey!!!! I’m doing good. Enjoying life and keeping busy with work and my kiddos. How about you girlie?

      • Oh lovely….🙂
        Hahaha, this old girlie is a bit under the weather this morning but she will be ok….

      • Good!! Have a great Monday!

      • It’s been a threadbare Monday. Thank you….wishing a great Monday.

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